Conclusion - Self Check Skills

Author’s Note:  This is the final self-check skill that I am attempting to master.  I am going to try to master the skill of creating a sample conclusion for a paper.  I am going to use the thesis statements that I wrote in the thesis statement self-check skill.  I am also going to write down what my three body paragraphs are about before writing about the conclusion.  My goal is to master this skill.

Topic:  Why School should Start Later

Thesis Statement: In order to have success and have students focused during the day, school should start later.

Topic for Body Paragraph 1:  What are some of the reasons why school should start later

Topic for Body Paragraph 2: Studies that Have Been Done

Topic for Body Paragraph 3:  Results of the Studies 

Conclusion:  The studies have shown, and the results have come in. But why have school administrators not acted yet? The younger kids don’t need as much sleep as a teenagers, yet they make the teenagers go to school earlier during the day.  Also, the focus levels have improved and the grades of the students have improved too. So it is time for the school administrators to act to improve the overall grades so they can go in a positive direction for middle school and high school students.

Topic:  Why we should Protect our National Parks

Thesis Statement: Preserving the National Parks is something that should continue, because many animals live in the parks and they contain beauty that can be found nowhere else in the country.

Topic for Body Paragraph 1:  History of the National Parks

Topic for Body Paragraph 2: Animals that live in the Parks

Topic for Body Paragraph 3: The Popularity of the parks and Some of the Top Attractions 

Conclusion:  The National Parks make up some of the best beauty in the world.  Millions of people come to visit these parks every year for the joy of seeing something different.  Many unique animals live only in specific national parks, so we would need to protect their homes too. In order to protect these parks, the government should continue to invest money in protecting all the National Parks that our country has so they can be enjoyed for generations to come.  It was Theodore Roosevelt’s idea in 1906 to preserve areas of land to protect what is inside to people could see, and today that idea worked out perfectly.